Prologue
“My son,” the words slipped out before she could stop herself.
“What?” Gandhari pounced on her.
“Arjuna!” Muttered Kunti, trying to cover up her mistake, but her eyes were fixed on the intruder.
Gandhari’s maids were whispering in the Queen’s ears, Kunti saw in dismay.
“Then why are you looking at that stranger?”
Kunti hemmed and hawed but managed to evade. Gandhari looked suspicious though she did not press Kunti. But what was happening before her was enough to make Kunti bite her lip and clench her fist. The stranger and Arjuna were standing, facing each other. Kunti was hoping someone would stop the duel. She saw Kripa take a step forward as if to stop the fight, but Suyodhana who was standing next to him laid a restraining hand on his arm.
Kunti felt her vision go black. It was a momentary weakness and it passed, but it was not unnoticed.
“Why are you so affected?” Demanded Gandhari, “Do you feel that the intruder is better than Arjuna? Your other sons are quite unconcerned, my maids tell me. Why are you alone so bothered?”
Kunti swallowed and shook her head before remembering that the other woman could not see her.
“It’s nothing,” she muttered.
“I’ll tell the King to stop the fight,” there was a sneer in Gandhari’s voice. Kunti stiffened. Arjuna would never forgive her if he learnt that this fight was stopped due to her fears. But how could she simply sit here and watch this? To reveal the truth was even more unthinkable.
“No, don’t!” She said. “I’m certain my son would prevail.”
Which was true in either case, thought she bitterly.
A figure materialized before her.
“Stop this fight,” he said sternly.
“Who is that?” Asked Gandhari. “Who’s there?”
The deva’s eyes bored into Kunti’s. His next words were for her ears alone. “If you do not reveal the truth, I am going to announce it from the sky!”
Kunti blanched. The deva had gone, but she had no doubt he would do as he said.
“What is happening?” Muttered Gandhari.
“I have something to tell you,” said Kunti and finally admitted the truth. The stranger was her son, hers and Suryadeva’s, born before her marriage. She also confessed she knew he had been adopted by a charioteer in Hastinapura.
Gandhari rose and went to her husband. She whispered in his ear. He paled and then said to Vidura. “What is going on now?”
“The stranger and Arjuna are facing each other for battle! The stranger looks to be as skilled as Arjuna!”
“Small wonder!” Chuckled Dhritarashtra, raising an arm to stop the proceedings.
The crowd fell silent and the two men lowered their bows.
“Bring him to me,” ordered Dhritarashtra.
Kripa and Drona escorted him to the King.
Dhritarashtra felt the young man’s face. He was good looking. And from Vidura’s descriptions, he carried himself well too.
The King hugged the stranger amidst exclamations from the crowd.
“Citizens,” he said aloud and lowered his voice to ask the young man his name.
“Vasusena,” he said, bewildered.
“Citizens,” The King announced. “I give you the eldest son of my brother, Pandu, his Kanina son, Vasusena!”
The uproar was deafening. Kunti clutched the sides of her seat and kept her smile fixed. If looks could kill, both Gandhari and Dhritarashtra would have been dead by then.
Vasusena stood still. He opened his mouth to tell the King that obviously there was some mistake when he caught sight of Kunti’s face. If it was a mistake, his mind told him, it was for her to correct them.
The next moment, the five Pandavas were there, bending down to touch his feet and looking at him with tearful and adoring eyes.
He felt helpless as he was gathered into the arms of Bheeshma and Vidura who both kept smelling his head like dogs who had got a particularly appetizing piece of bone.
He automatically raised his brothers and they threw themselves into his arms with gusto, nearly knocking him down in their enthusiasm.
“Oye! Be careful,” said he, clutching them and bracing himself.
“Sorry, we got carried away,” Bheema looked really cute when he was sheepish.
Vidura whispered something in Yudhistira’s ears and Yudhistira nodded.
He went down into the arena and escorted someone respectfully up. Vasusena immediately went forward to touch his feet.
“Father!” Said he.
Atiradha raised him and smelt his head.
“My son,” he whispered. There was regret and grief in his tone and Vasusena knew then that he was not this man’s son by birth.
“Be with your family,” Atiradha said and would have walked away if Vidura had not stopped him. “You and your family shall stay with Prince Vasusena and his brothers.” Said the Prime Minister.
Vasusena smiled gratefully at the man and was surprised by the warmth of his answering smile.
awesome Prologue Geeta didi.super interesting & unique one. Loved it.Waiting to read more.
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Thank you Madhu! Glad u enjoyed it. 🙂
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Nice angle of seeing things
Did this story is completed if so can you share it
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It is abandoned, sorry
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Can you share atleast the written pages
I am dieing to read this type of stories.
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Sorry, there’s nothing. I’ve completely reworked it into an original work, so there are no written pages left of this.
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Can you share atleast the written pages
I am dieing to read this type of stories
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Ha ok
What is the rework name
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The same name, but it is not MB related anymore
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Ha ok
What is it related to
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It’s an original work, not related to anything
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Can you post me the link
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It’s posted here somewhere, pls search for it
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Ha thanks
Can you please send me a p.m if you start any Mahabharat fics
dombvs0079@gmail.com
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Sure, you can check out my author page in amazon, most of my mb works are published there
https://authorcentral.amazon.com/gp/books
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Thanks
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Hello
Geetha didi(can I call you didi???).
I am writing this post to ask whether are you a member in Indian forums if so can you tell me your name as I have started writting there I can really appreciate your help, advice and insight on my work
Waiting for your reply a brother ( I hope you don’t get angry or insulted because I am seeing you as a sister)
Bvs(vinay)
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Hello
Geetha didi(can I call you didi???).
I am writing this post to ask whether are you a member in Indian forums if so can you tell me your name as I have started writting there I can really appreciate your help, advice and insight on my work
Waiting for your reply a brother ( I hope you don’t get angry or insulted because I am seeing you as a sister)
Bvs(vinay).
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I don’t mind. I used to be in IF, but I’m not there any more. Sorry
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If you’re writing in the new K-S forum, then I’ll beg you to excuse me from reading. I don’t like Uruvi, and I’m not interested in reading Karn-Uruvi stories. I couldn’t finish Karna’s wife, and I’m not watching the show. The only KarUruvi story I’ve read and liked was written by an IF member called Dhivyakrish during the time MB was being aired in Star. I’m sure you understand.
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Ofcourse I can understand you didi
I want to write in SPK or MB but they are closed.
So I am writing in K-S.
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No problem didi.
Can you help me to unblock some members I accidentally blocked on IF.
What is your account name in IF. I am asking because I have seen names of some of your works there
Waiting for your reply your brother.
Vinay
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Sorry, I’ve no idea how to block or unblock anyone in IF. As I said, I was in IF once, so names of my works might be there, but I’ve removed all of them from IF, and now I’m not there any more
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Hi Didi
How are you doing?
Just saw your FB page.All the best for your future works.
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Thank you. I’m posting some MB related stories in my other blog and wattpad.
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